I have made a few changes to my coursework to improve it. This includes completely re changing and rearranging a page that didn't follow conventions of a magazine page. I included information on diet pills which links in with my research that i did before for my coursework. I still have work to do, such as taking pictures of models as one of the models i used was a slightly younger aged girl! This needs to be changed so that the model looks more realistic and believable for the magazine target audience.
I also need to add more quotes and headings into my front cover as it is looking quite spacious and this isn't normal for a fashion magazine.
This is my plan for the next few days!
