This week we handed in our second draft of work. This was the first time i had received any feedback from people in my class about my coursework. Overall they said that my magazine was convention but had a few changes to make to reinforce the conventions of a fashion magazine. For the front page, i had a few white spaces that needed to be filled with text, and to add more images! This was also applicable to the contents page too. I have to re-shoot the image of my model for the front page as some of her hair got cut out in the editing.
Another improvement that i had suggested was for my article on weight loss. I had an idea to put a tape measure as the banner instead of just a block colour. This will make it look more relatable to the article and add in the theme of it.
